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Night of the Ocean
Axel Bruns

   
 
 

Something had changed. He had woken from sleep half-way through the night. He glanced about his bedroom, trying to make out in the dark if anything had happened, if something had moved, fallen, had produced a sound of relief from pressure, like wood sometimes did. He couldn't spot anything unusual, and yet noticed something, a change so subtle yet so deep it almost escaped him. He lay back, closed his eyes and breathed in slowly, trying to remember exactly the bedroom he had been used to for a long time.

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Breathing, he found what had startled him: the air itself was different. There was a faint undertone of smell, moist and rich, spicy, an old, ancient experience, almost forgotten, stuffed away with his least remembered memories, like a child's toys neglected by the adult. It was the smell of water. Not ordinary water, not water running out of taps, but living water, full of life, of fish, of algae, green-blue and deep, salty, an ocean, a warm Southern sea.

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  Still lying there, his eyes closed, he could also make out the sound of small waves, coming in through the windows he had shut to shield himself from the cold, damp autumn weather of the evening before. Another change: there was no rain to be heard, and opening his eyes now he could see stars and the moon's sickle through his window, in cloudless skies. What was all this? He wanted to know, and finally got up. When he opened his window, the smell of sea became much stronger, and with it, warm air streamed past him. It sharpened all his senses, blew the last remains of sleep out of his mind.   3  
Volume Two 
Issue One: July 2001
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