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  ........... ........... ............ Hounded: An extract from a novel set in the future, The Last Clone          
Maurilia Meehan          
 
  But to think of a dog as a rival for his affections was not an emotion she was proud of. Nevertheless she felt it. She tried to make her breathing as shallow as possible in the bedroom in order to stop breathing in the dog's hot odour, but it didn't work.
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  Andre promised to wash the dog every day.
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  Outside of course, in the porch perhaps if it was raining.
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  To seal that agreement, Hildegard agreed to have a spa with Andre, the spa being their code word for love-making, in this, the seventh year of their relationship. A rare event. Andre lined up the blue, pink, yellow and white creamy lotions and bubble baths, blew off the fine layer of dust on their glass shoulders, while Hildegard bent over to turn on the taps.
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  But her hand stopped in mid-air.
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  There were three short black dog hairs lying in the pink bathtub. She sat on the side of the bath.
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  It was incredible to think that, in spite of all her efforts to establish a little dog-free hygiene in the house, Andree had clearly bathed the dog in their consecrated love-making area.
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  But a relationship can't end, can it, because of a dog?
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  The puppy grew, in a matter of days it seemed, into a large black creature of indeterminate breed, which Andre failed miserable to train (this was not her role--she was too busy trying to ignore it.) She would come home to find it sitting on the furniture, where it left black doggy hairs, which Andre assured her she was imagining. There was also that unique doggy smell, perhaps arising from their diet of supermarket bargains, and not congenital to the species (though she doubted this).
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  It continued to sneak in to the bedroom and to surreptitiously position itself on the bed, careful to go only on Andre's side. Only the smell would give it away. (Andre still swore she was imagining the smell).
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  Andre fed the dog morsels from the breakfast table, assumed it would come out with them on walks which she had previously enjoyed with him exclusively.
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  In the dark of the night, while Andre back was turned, as usual, to her, the smell of the dog made her toss in her sleep and dream of it sleeping in Andre's arms.
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Volume Four 
Issue One: August 2003
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