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Boy's Night Out
Ethel Webb Bundell

   
 
  Trevor brushed his brown hair over his eyes and round his head in a swirl, looking at himself critically in the mirror. The black T-shirt bought at the local chain store had been worth skimping his pocket money; it teamed well with the black jeans and he'd be hard to see in the dark.
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  He could hear his mother undressing in her cold bedroom, everything white in there, furniture, bedclothes, curtains and the walls; even her skin; only the carpet a pale grey. Momentarily he imagined it spattered with blood, rich and red, but he shook the thought out of his mind.
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  Dad wouldn't bother him, hiding away in his home office, his caved-in figure hunched over those interminable sums in great hefty ledgers, the whisky on the desk beside him. When he tired of it all, at two or three in the morning, he'd fling himself on the divan in there and snore until breakfast.
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  Poor bloody Barry would be asleep too, curled up like a baby hedgehog. Probably pissed himself already. Out there, washing his sheet every morning, standing on a box in the laundry, frantic to get it out on the line, standing in the wheelbarrow, before Mum gets up. Still, as Mum says, at four years old you're not a baby. You're not supposed to wet your bed.
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  The window opened wide silently, much better since he oiled the hinges last week. Outside, the profusion of unpruned roses in Mrs. Truslove's garden scented the cool Spring evening. He stood for a while in the protection of the shrubs in his own garden, practising until he could remain completely motionless for at least ten minutes, his breath coming so slow and even that it scarcely moved the muscles of his chest.
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  He'd spent many months learning this trick. At first, he'd felt dizzy; the breaths too short and shallow. He smiled, remembering the praise he'd earned for paying attention in Chapel as well as in class, when he'd been merely perfecting this trick, hearing not a word of the service.
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  He moved at last, bare feet making no sound on the gravel. His mother's window tightly screened, as he'd expected, made him sneer. Her chest almost flat, rib bones sticking out like a starving horse, she hadn't the sort of body you'd expect in a mother. No wonder Dad slept in his home office; it must be like hugging a bag of bones.
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  Outside in the street, he passed the Doyle's house. Better to go there later, the household seemed to stay active longer at night with Mr Doyle pecking away at the piano and uncannily, coming to the window at the slightest noise in the garden. Another rotten old schoolteacher, he fancied himself as a composer. As though those horrible sounds could ever be music!
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  He passed Mrs. Truslove's gate. Unoiled for years, it creaked. Lightly vaulting the fence further down, creeping down the side of the house, a lighted window told him Mrs. Cooper and Betty might be getting ready for bed. They'd drawn the curtains, but not very efficiently, the blind still rolled at the top of the window, leaving a triangular chink at the bottom, enough for a good look if he stood behind the lavender bush near the wall.
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  Betty, already undressed, sat on her bed, playing with her toy panda. She looked lumpier than ever in the thick pyjamas and he could see the pattern of clowns and elephants on the pink material. Her scanty, gingery hair, wet from the shower, lying in slimy yellow strands across her yellow scalp.
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Volume Four 
Issue Two: November 2003
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