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Not like Your Mum
Michael Hunt

   
 
  "This woman is nothing like your mum," said Mrs Walton, without taking her eyes off the road. Max wondered what she meant. Could there be two people with nothing in common? And how similar must two people be before you say they're like each other? Someone like his mum would be tall and slender, with a fair skin and black hair that now had to be dyed every week. She'd expect a lot from people, because she was so good at everything herself, She'd work in a big office block, shuffling paper, 'managing' and 'supervising'. He felt obliged to say something.
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  "What's she like?" he asked. They were heading west, on a road that kept them travelling in the same direction. The country was becoming flatter and drier.
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  "Well, I've only met her twice. She's just an ordinary woman. She doesn't say much. She spent twenty years looking after kids, I know that." She tried to think of something else to say. "You'll have to find out for yourself," was all she could manage in the end.
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  Mrs Walton was nothing like his mum, either. She was short and rounded, with greying hair and an air of practicality. She would probably control herself if she was angry, rather than throw things. There was very little she had in common with his mum, apart from the belief that kids should follow the directions given by their elders and betters. He could imagine her wearing some kind of a uniform.
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  Max stared out of the window, trying to find something, anything, out there apart from grass, cattle and scrubby trees. As he scanned the horizon dejectedly, he was the first to notice a distant petrol station on the plain in front of them.
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  "I need to go to the toilet, Mrs Walton, could we please stop soon." He called her Mrs Walton, even though she had told him to call her Gloria. He couldn't help it. She seemed too much like one of the teachers at school.
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  Max felt better as soon as he got out of the car. He didn't really need to go to the toilet, he just wanted a break. It felt good to walk around to the back of the building and be filled with the scent of dust and eucalyptus, and the sound of birdsong.
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  When he returned to the car, Mrs Walton was sitting in the driver's seat, sucking a peppermint. She offered him one.
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  "No thanks." Max hated peppermints.
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Volume Four 
Issue Two: November 2003
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