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Pick Up Your Heart on Your Way Out the Door...
Craig Cormick

   
 
  And so she brought him home. She'd been looking at him, across the room for about half an hour, and could see he looked like he'd just wandered into the party from a car crash or something. That look of numb shock on his face. She'd seen that before, she thought. But he wasn't bad looking. So she asked the hostess to introduce her.
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  It was freezing out, and she apologised for the heater in her car being so lousy, - It's only an economy-model car, with economy-model heating, she said, - but my heater at home works.
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  But he didn't seem to notice. He stared out the window as if he could see something there, while she crouched down low to see through the small patch of defrosted glass.
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  - I call this home, she told him as she led him into her tiny flat, turning on the heating by the door. It was going to be way below zero again tonight. A good night to have somebody in bed with you, she thought.
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  - You want a warm drink? she asked. - Irish coffee?
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  - Thank you, he said and sat on the couch in the lounge room. Just sat there. Didn't walk around and poke at her CDs, didn't pull her books off the shelf, didn't look at her prints of puppy dogs and roll his eyes a little. Just sat there and watched her as she boiled the water. No bloke had ever done that before.
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  And so, after a drink or two, she dragged him along to the bedroom. Told him to climb under the doona. — It's called a futon, she said. They always asked about the bed, even though he hadn't. Then she said she had to go to the bathroom. She always got a little nervous at this point. What might he be like when she got back? Naked and erect and waiting for her? Hairy all over? Three nipples? Or worse - nervous and still sitting on the end of the bed.
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  But he was lying under the covers as she'd asked him. She had her nightgown on and turned off the light and climbed in beside him. She had to reach around the bed a bit to find him, and when she did she almost gasped. He was freezing. Particularly his feet. They were like blocks of ice.
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  She looked at him a moment, and then said, - Let's just lie here a moment and warm up.
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  - That would be nice, he said. And so she put her head on his chest. It felt as if she had placed it into the freezer to listen if the frozen steaks there had anything to say. It was even colder than his feet.
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Volume Four 
Issue Two: November 2003
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