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Public Wash
Julie Bilbrough

   
 
  Stella stepped inside. The air thicker than outside. A busy humming rolling through her ears. The smell of ammonia, cleanliness. The type that can only be achieved after filth. She liked it here. She hauled her basket onto the laminate table. It was heavier than usual.
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  'Quite a load today Stella.' George appeared with a spare basket.
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  'Split it up Stell. Twice as many, twice as light.'
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  'Thanks George.'
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  George always has a solution. He was one of the reasons she drove the extra five minutes. She liked the way he swept the floors and wiped the tables. Liked it when he topped up the coffee machine or got down on his knees to get behind a dryer. He kept busy while she sorted her washing. When he carried her basket he never looked in. He understood privacy. George was a gentleman. Not an Aussie. That's how George knew about people. He wasn't from here.
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  The machine was waiting. One last dousing and Ben would be gone. Swished away in a lemon cocktail. Stella was already losing the trace of his scent. It was mingling with everything. He'd be happy about that, she thought.
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  'We need to see more people Stella,' he'd said. She imagines Ben, like cheap dye, running out of her sheets, rushing down the drains and mixing into the river to rest someplace else. She turns the knob and let's go.
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  'Stella's here. Good.' Duncan can't stand it when the place is empty. Or full of people he doesn't know. The irregulars. Stella's a regular. She'll come out back with him to share a smoke. If mum knew, she'd kill him. Stella let's him use her mouth spray.
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  'My boyfriend doesn't know.' She laughs. Duncan doesn't like the boyfriend. Not that he's jealous. Stella's too old for him. He just doesn't like the need to lie. There's nothing worse than a pushover. He approaches George.
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  'Hey Georgie. Is the industrial free?'
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  'What you got on them today?' Duncan holds up his overalls.
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  'Grease lightening!' He sings his best Travolta impersonation. George laughs.
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Volume Four 
Issue Two: November 2003
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