dotlit - The Online Journal of Creative Writing The Online Journal
of Creative Writing

 Edited by Donna Lee Brien (general), Philip Neilsen (poetry), and Axel Bruns (hypermedia and Webmaster) ISSN 1444-2817 
  ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... .....
 
Contents
Commissioned Works
Poetry
Prose
Creative Nonfiction
Hypermedia
Reviews
News
About
Archives
People
Contacts
Responses
Links

 

  ........... ........... ............          
   15 Aug. 2003

Unconscious Symbolic Strength: 'Rice' by Geniwate
Steven Kiernan

   
 
       
 
  The literary hypertext, Rice by Geniwate, is a perfect example of the type of post-structuralist writing that flourishes in the mélange of information, art and culture that is the Internet. There is a tendency in hypertext writing toward the production of loosely connected postmodern texts that confuse the audience with apparently arbitrary links and a lack of any narrative motivation. Although to some degree Rice could be described in these terms, its strong thematic resonance enables it to stand where others have fallen.
  1  
  Rice won joint first prize in the international trAce/Alt-X Hypertext Competition in 1998, and was supported by both the Media Resource Centre and the Australia Council. The author, Geniwate (or, more accurately, Jenny Weight), originates from Adelaide, where she writes and studies poetic forms, exploring the possibilities for incorporating her poetry into digital environments. Rice is a sophisticated fruit of these investigations.
  2  
  Inspired to create Rice after a trip to Vietnam, some of the writing draws from Geniwate's experiences visiting Vietnam while others are a spread of anecdotal and historical stories. Throughout, the author focuses on the deep but indeterminable ties between Vietnamese culture and our own. From the Vietnam War to the modern tourist economy, connections in blood, money and politics have linked our two nations in ways as subtle and elusive as the links in this hypernarrative. The implications for relations between conflicting social orders — as those that occurred between capitalists and communists in Vietnam before, during and after the war — seem particularly important when considering the state of the contemporary world. Geniwate explores such ideas of intellectual colonialism in Vietnam from a range of perspectives in what seems to be an attempt to investigate the price of peace. There is also an overwhelming feeling of loss and a sense of homesickness that echoes across in its fragmentary structure.
  3  
  Rice incorporates a range of intertextual elements. Within the borders of this hypertext, the audience is introduced to an interchangeable mix of prose and poetry. The multitudinous difference in poetic forms used creates a compositional tension that is held in fine balance throughout the work. I found the shift from tightly and traditionally structured poems to more experimental, associative styles a powerful effect, and the range of prose lexias share this tangential asymmetry.
  4  
  What affirms Rice as a piece of writing entwined in its non-linear, deconstructionist medium is, however, the narrative's inclusion of graphic and sound elements. The user is guided through the network of ambiguous lexias by a graphic menu which utilises thumbnail images with thematic significances that stress Rice's non-narrative form. To enable the audience to freely explore the story without too much confusion, each image links the user back to this main menu. Accompanying the text is a soundtrack of music and atmospheric noise designed to draw the reader in. The sound serves to create a more absorbing experience, rendering the lexias with more colour and resonance than the writing alone. Along with still images and sound, Geniwate has also used shockwave animation to further extend the multimedia potential of the piece.
  5  
  Although the author is courageous in her attempts to use a wide variety of media to illustrate and contextualise Rice, she is let down by the quality of some of them. The images are generally grainy and low-resolution and distract the reader while detracting from the fineness with which the written elements are drawn. Despite this, Geniwate maintains a tight structural grip on an otherwise tangled, enigmatic narrative. The poems, in particular, speak with unconscious symbolic strength that draws the user in, and the form of Rice conveys its message while enabling the reader to explore a foreign land through a digital landscape.   6  
Book Reviews
Back
1
  Forward
   
 
top index | author's bio | download this review © 2003