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   12 Nov. 2002

Back from the Wilderness: 'Angel Rock' by Darren Williams
Neil Foster

   
 
  Darren Williams. Angel Rock. Harper Collins 2002. RRP A$26.95.      
 
  Disappearance and loss, resurrection and redemption pervade the 311 pages of Angel Rock, the second novel by Darren Williams, fitting themes given the author's own troubled literary career. In 1995, Williams won the Australian/Vogel Literary Award, Australia's most lucrative prize for unpublished manuscripts by writers under 35, for the novel Swimming in Silk. Yet despite the profile this gave him, Williams was unable to secure a book deal and vanished from the literary spotlight.   1  
  Seven years later and still only 35, Williams has returned with a novel superior to its prize-winning predecessor, both in terms of its prose and narrative. Angel Rock builds from a simple, yet intriguing, premise: two young boys go missing in northern NSW bushland in 1969; ten days later, only one returns. The social and psychological aftermath of this tragedy on the fictional logging community of Angel Rock unravels from the perspectives of three very different, but equally troubled, characters - Tom Ferry, the thirteen year-old who returns alone; Grace, the introverted daughter of the local policeman; and Gibson, a city detective investigating a seemingly unrelated suicide.   2  
  Williams, who grew up in the NSW timber country, renders its beauty in watercolour detail:   3  
 

In the morning the valley was flooded with a silver mist as though a strange inland sea had risen while they slept. They took it in turns to walk down to the river's hidden edge and splash and wash themselves awake before eating a breakfast of porridge with Sunshine milk and golden syrup. By the time they'd finished, the sun had crested the hills to the east and found rainbows in the steam coming off their mugs of tea. (p200)

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  As with Swimming in Silk, it is turn of phrase and deftness with imagery where Williams excels:   5  
 

The memory was as mysterious as an underground stream, as black and snakelike, headless and tailless; a black echo of lightning deep deep down inside the earth - inside him - but unreachable. (p242)

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Henry Gunn was waiting for them down by the boat ramp, a terrible uncertainty in his eyes, as if he doubted the veracity of the air he breathed and the earth he walked on. (p65)

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  A blend of literary and genre fiction, Angel Rock is really two books. On one level, it is the attractive coming-of-age story of Tom and Grace, young adults struggling not just with personal tragedy but with the everyday ordeals of small town adolescence. Both characters are sensitively-drawn and their emotional journey gives Angel Rock a tender resonance which only wavers when the focus of the story shifts to the dark meanderings of Gibson's investigation. It is on this second level, as a conventional mystery thriller, where Angel Rock is less satisfying. In contrast to the measured beauty of the pastoral scenes, Gibson's presence jars as if inserted at the insistence of a Hollywood studio. As familiar a cop as in any straight-to-video thriller, his demons are the usual ones (drinking problem, career burnout, dead family) and it is impossible not to hear his observations in whiskey-shot voice-over:   8  
 

Gibson looked at her, at the fierce protectiveness in her eyes. Had Darcy's life been taken by another he doubted she would have shown any mercy to the killer were she ever to judge him. She reminded him of one of those sad-looking stone angels in graveyards with their heads at a tilt, listening to heavenly song so highly pitched only they and dogs could hear it. Up there with the beating of bees' wings, the fluttering hearts of the lovelorn - but altogether deaf to the appeals of the guilty. It didn't matter. She seemed a brave kid and he fell immediately for her spirit. (p105)

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  With dubious character motivations (would a detective really come all this way on a hunch, would the police force let him and would everyone in town talk so readily?) and leaps in logic as spectacular as Bob Beamon at altitude, the plot becomes increasingly silly and the Hollywood dramatics of the finale, although beautifully phrased, seem an unsatisfactory resolution to the story's opening.   10  
  Yet, despite the obvious tension between the literary and thriller elements, both emanate from the same thematic core. Each character in Angel Rock is searching, physically and metaphysically: for the missing boys, for ways of coping when only one is found, for answers to life, for the meaning to suppressed memories, for forgiveness and redemption. In tone with these struggles, the story is awash with biblical and religious allusions: angels, visions, New Edens, fire and brimstone preachers, lion dens, Ezras and Floods, Lepers, resurrections from the dead and, for Tom and Gibson in particular, allegoric dreams:   11  
 

All he could remember of the dreams at first was the darkness in them, occasionally a flickering yellow light, but then he was able to recall the presence of something crouching in the darkness, something with teeth - man or beast he couldn't tell - waiting, watching. (p95)

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  Like the creature in one of Gibson's nightmares, Angel Rock is ultimately an odd beast, neither one thing nor the other. Yet, despite its flaws, Angel Rock remains a very readable and strikingly written yarn by an emerging author still honing his craft, its publication a vindication of persistence through seven years of obscurity. One suspects the best is still to come for Darren Williams. A young man, like Tom Ferry, back from the wilderness and now finally ready to seize his future.   13  
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