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   20 Nov. 2003

Uncharted Territory: Sushi Central by Alasdair Duncan
Grant Kennett

   
 
  Sushi Central by Alasdair Duncan. University of Queensland Press, St Lucia, Queensland, 2003. ISBN: 0 7022 3399 4.      
 
  What is it that a young gay man thinks about the most? The answer is, of course, himself. This realistic generalisation is one of the first things to hit you when reading Sushi Central, the debut novel of Brisbane writer, Alasdair Duncan.
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  Sushi Central's main character, Calvin, is sixteen and has slept with more men than he can remember; but he has never loved any of them. He's not sure he believes in love anyway, but is obsessed with the idea of it. Calvin is by no means a sympathetic protagonist. He is agonizingly self-obsessed, vain and indulgent, but isn't everyone at sixteen? The reader is left constantly wanting to slap him. It's an excruciating characterisation, but perfectly executed. Calvin never gets his well-deserved talking to in the story. It's not like his father doesn't try, but Calvin is too shut off, too much the victim, to let any of it sink in.
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  When Calvin meets Anthony, a ludicrously attractive, unfeeling porn star, there begins a downward spiral of sex and obsession that can only end in despair. A lot of Calvin's story seems like middle-class angst. The ever-mysterious death of his younger brother, perhaps Calvin's only real claim to any sense of actual tragedy in his privileged world, is barely touched upon. Much more pressing and traumatic to Calvin is the inconvenience of being checked out by an ugly, old guy.
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  Duncan does try to run through the whole gamut of gay experience. There's coming out, promiscuity, drugs, booze, AIDS, nightclubs, loneliness and more. Sometimes it seems a bit heavy-handed but these are the things that young gay men want to know about. Suchi Central is to be marketed as a broad literary title, but I believe it would do much better if targeted at the youth market. While it is possible for an older reader to relate to the character of Calvin, personally I did so nostalgically, for Calvin is discovering and learning things I found out about years ago.
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  Duncan's writing style seems to have been intentionally constructed to play on the modern gay syndrome, flicking between entries in Calvin's diary, screenplays and Calvin's own stream of consciousness and littered with an endless stream of pop culture references. The material and the physical rule Calvin's world. Calvin first defines people by their beauty, then by what they wear. In fact, most of the people in Calvin's world seem to be beautiful; the greatest diviner of ugliness is age. Occasionally Duncan gets snagged on a gay cliché, as 'We were fourteen/fifteen and totally denied an outlet for our fears and desires etc.' At times, the novel may also be a little regionally specific with many of the Brisbane sites that Calvin visits completely foreign to anyone not from South East Queensland. A little more description of these thus wouldn't have gone astray.
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  With the constantly changing writing style Duncan seems to be selling his own abilities short. The last chapter of Sushi Central is four pages of prose and it is the most touching moment in the novel, as well as its most disturbing. As Calvin is finally drawn into a world of pornography and prostitution, letting all of his inhibitions and standards dissolve, he is flooded with memories of happy childhood holidays. For the first time you can see that perhaps this angst-ridden teenager isn't so tiresome after all. Behind all of his self-importance and the lies he even tells himself, he is lost, alone and most of all, terrified.
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  In writing Sushi Central, Duncan is wading into uncharted territory. You would think there would be a range of titles for young gay men and women, but there aren't. So, in a way, this novel is a benchmark for gay youth fiction, but I would not expect any GLAAD media awards. Duncan's characters are far too realistic for that.   7  
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