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   9 Aug. 2000

Exceptional First Novel: 'Love and Vertigo', by Hsu-Ming Teo
Penelope Davie

   
 
  Hsu-Ming Teo. Love and Vertigo. Allen & Unwin. RRP: $A18.95.      
  Love and Vertigo is an exceptional first novel. The structure is mostly elegant, and feels natural, as if the narrator was telling a story in the only possible way available to her. The characters are fat on the page. Teo describes in loving and fearsome detail their eating, fighting, digesting and fucking, they refuse to lie down and be read as two dimensional.
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  The first chapter, however, lets the rest of the book down. This is a terrible shame if it deters readers from persevering. Where the rest of the book fits together with a clever balance of ease and tension, the first chapter reads as if Teo was directed to tie things together neatly at the start and set the stage. The reader learns too much about Grace too soon, before we care about her, and it is difficult to understand why she is in Singapore dealing with a family she clearly feels antipathy towards. The descriptions fall heavily in the retrospect of finishing the book they may make sense, but they do not sit happily at the beginning of the novel.
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