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   1 June 2001

The Waiters by Martin Armiger
Donna Lee Brien

   
 
 
The Waiters by Martin Armiger. Text Publishing, 2000.
     
  'No-one grows up wanting to be a waiter', states Vivienne Edges in this unusual love story. At this point, Vivienne, a student of architecture and a bad waitress, is berating William Nott, the maître d' at Bistro Franco (a swish Sydney eatery). Nott decides to marry her the night he meets her, this decision not prompted by any mad moment across a crowded room or even unbridled lust, but because of the fact that Vivienne is looking for a husband. This unlikely situation provides many narrative possibilities, only some of which are completely resolved.
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  The story is set almost completely in a series of Sydney restaurants, bars and cafés, many of them tantalisingly almost recognisable. The behind-the-scenes life of these eating and drinking sites, and the waiters, bar staff and customers who people them, provides an often humorous series of subplots for Armitage to weave his novel around. Anyone who has worked in a restaurant will be familiar with the tales of greed, deception, seduction, betrayal and jealousy that animate the long nights of those in the service industry. Real tragedy is mixed with the farcically comic, especially in the sex and death events which happen regularly at Franco's — some of these seem likely to achieve the status of urban myth. 'There is nothing so extraordinary', Vivienne decides, as 'the secret lives of ordinary folk', but these extraordinary tales of ordinary lives need to be told with a Armitage's light touch to successfully achieve this melding of comedy and social comment.
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  The central relationship between William and Vivienne, which begins and continues so inexplicably, is all explained, if not totally resolved, by the end of The Waiters. William's tragedy, it seems to me, is brought upon himself, by his fatal flaw. This is a particularly Sydney sin; he doesn't want much of anything. Everyone swirls around him, desiring and possessing what they want, while William really wants nothing more than what he has. Then he meets Vivienne, who wants a husband, and he is drawn into the cycle of dissatisfaction and yearning.
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  An earlier version of this review was published in Imago: New Writing.      
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